No Stop Signs, Speed Limit, Nobody’s Gonna Slow Me Down*

Recently I had an interesting comment exchange with Bill Selnes at Mysteries and More From Saskatchewan (an excellent blog that I highly recommend) about pacing and timing in crime fiction. It’s got me to thinking about how the pace of crime fiction novels has changed as time has gone by. In general, are today’s crime novels faster-paced with more twists and action than novels of earlier years? On the surface of it, you might think the answer is “yes;” we can all think of novels where the action moves quickly and sometimes unexpectedly. And timing and pacing is often a part of what publishers use to sell books. How many books have you seen advertised where the blurb includes words and phrases such as “pulse-pounding,” “action-packed,” or “twists and turns?” I’ve seen a lot of them.

That said, though, there are plenty of crime novels from the earlier days of the genre that also have lots of action and quick pacing and timing. And there are plenty of novels and series today that are both well-regarded and popular where the pacing isn’t fast. So there’s likely more to this question of pacing, timing and the drama in novels than it seems on the surface. And that’s what makes the question an interesting one :-) . One possibility is that sub-genre and author style also have a lot to do with it.

For instance, the hard-boiled sub-genre made famous by authors such as Mickey Spillane and Dashiell Hammett tends to have a lot of action and drama. Novels such as Hammett’s The Thin Man and Spillane’s My Gun is Quick include a number of fight scenes, chases and so on. The events in the stories happen quickly and unexpectedly, too. That fast pacing is part of what makes the hardboiled sub-genre popular with its fans. Today’s hardboiled series also feature quick pacing and timing and plenty of action. For instance, Sara Paretsky’s V.I. Warshawski doesn’t have many dull moments. Neither does Sue Grafton’s Kinsey Millhone. James Ellroy’s novels also feature plenty of action and quick pacing and timing. Hardboiled novels have always had lots of octane, so to speak, and that doesn’t seem to have changed over time.

The detective novel made famous by writers such as Agatha Christie, Ngaio Marsh, Dorothy Sayers and John Dickson Carr tends to have less fast-paced action. The focus in this genre is more on the mystery itself. There is violence (after all, they are murder mysteries) in these novels, and sometimes there are “high-octane” moments, but in general, they’re more focused on the mystery – the puzzle at hand – than they are on fast-moving events. Of course, at least in Christie’s case, that’s not true for each novel she wrote. The Big Four, The Man in the Brown Suit, and N or M? are all examples of Christie novels where there’s plenty of action, narrow escapes and so on. So this question of pacing and timing isn’t entirely a matter of sub-genre (I’ll get back to that in a minute). But, to use a proverbially very broad paintbrush, this kind of detective story tends not to focus as much on pace and action. That’s true today, too. For instance, P.D. James’ Adam Dalgliesh series certainly includes plenty of “action” scenes. But the focus is on the mystery. That’s also the case with Peter Robinson’s Alan Banks series and Henning Mankell’s Kurt Wallander series. Yes, there are fast-paced moments and twists and turns in the plots. But the emphasis isn’t on those moments as much as it is on the cases these sleuths are working.

Sub-genre does play a role in how much action there is in a novel, and how much pacing and timing there is. But it’s not the only factor. Author style matters as well. I don’t have a whole lot of research to support this but my guess is that author style plays a bigger role in a novel’s “octane level” than it used to play, simply because there is so much more variety and diversity in crime fiction than there was. Authors have more flexibility, so their individual ways of expressing themselves come through more obviously.

For example, Alexander McCall Smith’s Isabel Dalhousie series and his Precious Ramotswe series are both thoughtful, “quiet” series. There are certainly mysteries and in Mma. Ramotswe’s world, there are cases that need to be solved. Events happen, people interact and so on. But both series move along at a quiet pace. And that’s just the way some readers like their crime fiction.

Some authors such as Ruth Rendell/Barbara Vine and Margaret Yorke include action in their stories but it’s often more of what you’d call psychological action. In other words, the pace isn’t frantic in terms of one event happening after another. Rather, the “octane” comes from the buildup of psychological suspense.

Other authors such as Lee Child and Leigh Russell write thrillers. Their novels have a lot of action in them. The pace is quick and that pacing and timing add a great deal to the suspense of the stories. Here too, the pacing seems to be affected by the sub-genre (thrillers do tend to move at a faster pace and have more dramatic events) and author style.

With all of this, though, it’s worth pointing out that times have changed. Today’s crime fiction addresses sometimes very ugly issues in a way that wasn’t always done in the past. Today’s sleuths are more diverse than ever and live and work in more different kinds of contexts than ever. And today’s crime fiction fans are savvier than ever. They don’t want “cookie-cutter” plots (so there have to be well-written twists). They don’t want novels that aren’t engaging (so there has to be some action. Something has to happen). In that way, there is more room for drama, action, plot twists and so on than there was. And in that sense, crime fiction probably does include more novels with fast pacing and lots of plot twists than it did. It’s a larger genre with more diversity.

But modern crime fiction also includes plenty of novels and series where the pace is slower and where the focus is more on the mystery or the characters than it is on pacing and timing. And there are plenty of crime novels from bygone years that move at a fast pace and where there is all sorts of action and drama. That’s where there’s an argument that author style and sub-genre play important roles, too. In the end, crime fiction is affected by several factors, and that’s what makes it such an interesting genre. That goes as much for its pacing and timing as it does for any other aspect of the genre.

What are your thoughts on this question? Do you think today’s crime fiction novels are faster-paced and more “high-octane” than novels of earlier times? If you think other factors are involved, what do you think they are? If you’re a writer, how do you use pacing and timing in your work? Do you feel compelled to move things along really quickly and include lots of action?

 

 

 

*NOTE: The title of this post is a line from AC/DC’s Highway to Hell.

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20 Responses to No Stop Signs, Speed Limit, Nobody’s Gonna Slow Me Down*

  1. I’m sorry this is totally off topic Margot but it’s something I’ve been wondering about for ages and today’s choice has just pushed me over the edge of the curiosity cliff!

    Every day, I try to guess what song your title comes from. Some I get, some I don’t. What I want to know is this. Do you know all the songs you use or do you research lyrics? My own musical tastes should be a warning not to pigeonhole people but do you really listen to AC/DC? Although, I’m learning not to be surprised by new things I learn about you :-)

    • Sarah – LOL! No worries about the off-topic question! If it’s about music, I’m happy to discuss it. To be honest, I don’t have to research lyrics very often. I just love music – really love it. Admittedly, there’ve been a few times when I’ve done a bit of research to be sure I was right about the source of the lyrics I’d chosen. But most of the time, no. I listen to a lot of different music; AC/DC is one of the bands I’ve got in my collection, but I wouldn’t say I’m an AC/DC fanatic.

  2. As a reader, I admit I have a hard time with novels that drag. I do enjoy an “on the edge of my seat” thriller and fast-pacing that makes me read on past my bedtime. Lee Child’s Jack Reacher books are an excellent example of what I like to read.

    • Pat – You’re by no means alone. I think a lot of people enjoy that “adrenline rush” of very fast pacing and action. Publishers know that, too, and it’s quite possible that they hype those “high-octane” books for that reason; there’s a good market for them.

  3. You’re an AC/DC listener! Wow. I don’t think I really know much about them. I have a varied musical interest myself.

    As to your post, I agree with you. I think it depends a lot on the genre and the sub-genre. Even the author’s preference. I don’t write thrillers but sometimes I add in some thrilling moments. I do add more than one murder per novel to keep the suspense up.

    • Clarissa – Ah, another person with eclectic music tastes :-) .
       
      I think most authors want to keep the suspense strong in their novels, so they add events like another murder, or they add plot twists or shocking revelations. When those things fall out naturally from the plot, they can add those “high octane” moments to a novel even if it’s not “officially” a thriller or other typically fast-paced novel. I’ve used the second-murder strategy myself even though I wouldn’t say I write fast-paced novels. That’s one of the reasons that I think pacing is a matter of several factors. Author’s style and sub-genre are two of those factors, in my opinion.

  4. Margot: Thanks for the reference.

    Prior to reading your post I would have said the pace of mysteries was faster in the 21st Century. Now I wonder if I have been over-influenced by all the blurbs which emphasize thrills and action. It is my opinion, without specific evidence, that it is more difficult for reflective mysteries to get attention at this time.

    • Bill – Oh, it’s my pleasure to tell folks about your terrific blog. And I agree with you that reflective mysteries probably don’t get the media and public attention that more fast-paced novels get. I don’t have specific evidence either, but that’s my feeling. By their nature such mysteries don’t always call a lot of attention to themselves and that may play a role. It may be a little hard to market such mysteries today, too. I’m going to think about that; it’s really an interesting topic…

  5. At first glance I would have thought modern crime fiction would be faster pace, but you’ve brought up some interesting points here. I’m glad there are both. I enjoy a book that is adrenaline-driven and keeps you on the edge of your seat holding your breath, but I don’t think I’d want every book to be that way. It would be exhausting to read.

    Mason
    Thoughts in Progress
    Freelance Editing By Mason

    • Mason – I agree with you; I don’t think I’d want every book I read to be “high-octane,” either. They have their place, and I can really enjoy them. But not without a break. And it’s funny; a lot of today’s books do move at a fast pace. Those are the books that get a lot of attention and it’s sometimes surprising to find out how many don’t go at “warp speed.”

  6. I think there is a general assumption in ‘the industry’ that we (readers) want more thrills, faster pace etc – it goes along with the whole meme that the media spin about no one reading anymore and everyone having such short attention spans. You just have to look at book blurbs to get a sense of what they think we want to see, In my observations this is not the reality…I interact with a lot of young people in my work (trainees and graduates) and half of them are carrying great tomes around with them all the time…at least one of them is always reading Atlas Shrugged which has to be the slowest read ever…and if not that then they’re making their way through George R R Martin’s never ending series of phone book sized tales. But the people who make decisions on what gets published seem not to care about this reality which goes to Bill’s point about reflective mysteries not being able to get traction these days.

    I like a mixture of paces I think, if the story is good and the characters interesting I can become absorbed in a slower paced book (like the one I am reading at the moment, Simon Beckett’s Written in Bone) but sometimes I feel like an action-paced romp.

    I hope when you release your non-fiction book about crime fiction you think about linking it up to an itunes playlist of the relevant songs (if you’re not an iTunes user maybe I can take care of this). I made my own playlist of your earlier blog post titles but I must admit I forgot to keep it up. An eclectic music taste is a real treat as you always have something to go with your mood.

    • Bernadette – You put that so very well: the people who make the decisions about what get published are not always aware of what people actually read. Many people I know don’t necessarily go for the faster-paced novel even though that’s what’s constantly being hyped by publishers. And one of the effects that has is that authors who want to write a quieter, more reflective novel don’t always exactly get an enthusiastic welcome from publishers, agents and editors. So they get discouraged from writing this kind of novel; they hear, “readers want thrills and a lighting pace.” There are some excellent slower-paced books out there but as you and Bill say, we don’t always hear about them.
       
      I hope you’re enjoying Written in Bone. I like Simon Beckett’s work and I look forward to finding out what you think of that one. Once you’ve read it, I can also recommend Whispers of the Dead. But it has spoilers to Written in Bone, so I’m glad you’re reading that one first. And I know what you mean about variety of paces, too. I’m that way as well. I like to balance the “high octane” novels I read with slower-paced stories but like you, I have to find the characters or plot especially interesting in a book with a slower pace.
       
      And thanks so much for the idea about a companion iTunes playlist for my book. I’ve gotten started on the book and I could certainly make a list of the blog titles I use. That would make an interesting selling point :-) . I do use iTunes, too, so creating that wouldn’t be a huge problem. Hmm….. And I agree; eclectic music tastes mean I’m never without something I want to listen to.

  7. I think some of the old time thrillers were just as fast paced as today’s books. Sapper’s Bulldog Drummond jingoistic series for instance was full of action even though his exotic location was more likely to be Godalming than Grenada.
    The slower more introspective thriller/police procedural is something the Nordic writers do very well and that is part of their popularity.
    On musical taste, I still laugh when I think of the time Diana and I were discussing her Early Music CDs and our granddaughter piped up “Early Music…. Oh you mean U2.”

    • Norman – You know, I hadn’t thought specifically about one or another country or culture’s authors when I wrote this post. But you’ve got a point that many Nordic authors are quite good at that more introspective novels. I’d have to think about how much pace is affected by culture. I’m sure there’s a relationship there even if it’s not a tightly-linked out. That’s what I think is interesting about crime fiction, though. It’s affected by a constellation of factors, so that the whole is so much more than the sum of its parts.
       
      You’re quite right, too, that series like Sapper’s show that there was plenty of pace in some of the older thrillers. Another reason I don’t think era has everything to do with how much action there is in a story and how fast it moves…
       
      And I think it’s hilarious that your grand-daughter thought U2 counts as “early music.” It makes me feel old, though… As you know, from time to time newer artists re-make some of the older songs, so occasionally, my daughter has been listening to a “new” song that mysteriously (to her) I know. “How do you know that one?” she’s asked. She’s always a bit surprised to find out how many songs have been around for a long time.

  8. I think a lot of that talk about people not reading anymore and having short attention spans comes from NYC. The rest of the country, they should remember, is different. Enough of us out here take time to read, and like a variety of types of books, that I think they’re overly excited. The reason people aren’t buying books so much now is a matter of the economy, not lack of interest.

    • Barbara – You make two really important points there! Different regions have different cultures, and that’s not just true of the U.S. So what may be true for one group of readers isn’t necessarily true for others.
       
      And you’re quite right about the impact the economy is having on readership and book purchases. There are certainly other factors that play into reading habits now vs reading habits of other times. But economic conditions play a powerful role.

  9. I find a book crowded with incident (to quote Oscar Wilde) to be rather exhausting. If all you have is twists and turns it generally means you’ve got rather flat characters or you’re reading what I call “You’ll pay for the whole seat, you’ll only need the edge” books. I try to write plots that move at a fairly steady pace, but it’s not rollercoaster speed.

    • Elspeth – You do have a well-taken point there. It’s not easy to write really interesting and well-developed characters and a pulse-pounding pace. Some authors can do that but I’m honestly not sure that I could….
       
      By the way, I like the way you describe such books – that’s quite clever!

  10. I think Bernadette is right that ´the industry´ has determined we want pace. I don´t mind pace, but a proper plot and credible characters are far more important to me. So I wish that industry would listen to Barbara and cater for different tastes. Especially as writers often think pace = more murders. Nothing can make me more annoyed than a shallow book with one unmotivated murder after the other.

    • Dorte – Oh, you said that far better than I could have. A book like that, with a high “body count” and no plot to speak of, is so off-putting and certainly not reflective of the genre at its best, or even at its less-than-best. And the trouble is, new authors get the message that if their stories don’t include at least six or seven bodies with one hair-raising event after another, they won’t get published. And that’s really not what real readers want.

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