A Word or Two About “Sell-By” Dates…

One of the interesting things about honey is that it doesn’t spoil – well, not in the conventional sense (although it does ferment if it’s not stored properly). That’s why raw honey has just about an indefinite shelf life. Unfortunately, the same can’t be said of most other things, including crime fiction. There are some themes in crime fiction that seem to have gone on long past their “sell-by” dates. Now of course, crime fiction fans are varied as the genre is, so not everyone has the same list of these “spoiled” themes. But I think we can agree that the best novels don’t rely on shopworn elements. Rather, they contain depths and richness in the plots and characters so that they don’t need to depend on plot elements and characters that are past their “sell-by dates.” Here are just a few plot elements and character types that I think are past their “sell-by” dates. We’re all different, though, so feel free to differ with me if you do.

 

The “Persecuted Female Victim/s”

It’s quite true that women are far more likely than men to be raped and otherwise victimised. So it wouldn’t be realistic if a novel didn’t take that into account. And novels that address social justice for women can be both moving and brilliantly written. For instance, Unity Dow’s The Screaming of the Innocent tells the harrowing and heartbreaking story of Neo Kakang, a young girl who’d gone missing five years earlier. At the time, it was assumed that she was most likely the victim of a wild animal. But Amantle Bokaa, the young nurse who discovers a box containing the girl’s bloody clothes, becomes curious about what really happened to her. Bokaa’s search for the truth highlights the unpleasant reality of life for many Botswana women. It’s a difficult book to read, but a brilliantly told story. That novel seems to be an exception, though. As Bernadette at Reactions to Reading reminds us in her excellent review of Jussi Adler-Olsen’s Mercy (AKA The Keeper of Lost Causes), there are a number of novels in which there seems to be an emphasis on putting female characters through as much pain and suffering and humiliation as possible. Some novels dwell on what happens to these victims to a gratuitous extent, and what’s worse, for no productive reason.

By contrast, Mercy (AKA The Keeper of Lost Causes) features Merete Lynggard, an up-and-coming politician who disappears one day during a ferry ride with her brother Uffe. At first, everyone thinks her brother pushed her overboard during the heat of an argument. But her body hasn’t been found. Five years later, Carl Mørck and his assistant Hafez al-Assad re-open the case. Before long, it’s clear that Merete Lynggard could very well still be alive. This novel alternates between Merete Lynggard’s perspective and that of the two sleuths. As we follow what happens to Lynggard, we see that she is no stereotypical “persecuted female.” She’s a very strong character who’s determined to stay alive or at the very least, choose her own death. It’s refreshing, if I may share an opinion here, to have a character who is a victim in many senses, but who refuses to act like one. That sense of strength may be the reason for which Stieg Larsson’s Lisbeth Salander has become such a popular character. She’s certainly endured plenty, and Larsson’s Millenium trilogy doesn’t “sugarcoat” Salander’s experiences. But Lisbeth Salander is by no means a victim in the classic sense. She finds her own ways to survive and she takes her revenge.

 

The “Tortured Detective”

This is a difficult issue when it comes to crime fiction. On one hand, crime fiction fans want well-rounded and believable sleuths. And the sad fact is that we all have sorrow and difficulties in our lives. So we can often identify better with a sleuth who also faces or has faced struggles. And being a detective is traumatic. That line of work has no choice but to affect the sleuth. It wouldn’t be realistic if the sleuth didn’t have some sort of reaction to that trauma. That said, though, there are many novels in which the sleuth falls into the category of the stereotypical “tortured detective.”

I actually mean two things by that. One is the sleuth who’s faced tragedy and simply doesn’t seem able to function. I’m sure we can all think of fictional sleuths who’ve put us off because they seem to have no ability to pick up their lives over the long run. That can be irritating, as the reader almost wants to say, “Get some help! Pick up your life!” The same might be said of sleuths who seem to fall into the same life pattern again and again and don’t grow. The other thing I mean by the stereotypical “tortured detective” is the scenario where so many terrible and traumatic things happen to the sleuth – just for the sake of drama in the plot – that readers want to call out “Enough!”

All of that said, though, there are some fictional detectives who’ve faced, and continue to face, sad things that do affect them (sometimes permanently), but still function. They have lives and do some growing. For instance, to return to Adler-Olsen’s Mercy (AKA The Keeper of Lost Causes), Carl Mørck has undergone quite a lot of trauma. He was shot in the line of duty, and one of his colleagues was killed. Another was left paralysed. That certainly affects him and that’s clear in the novel. But Mørck hasn’t lost his will to live. He still has a sense of humour. He functions. That makes his character both human and appealing. The same is true of Arnaldur Indriðason’s Inspector Erlendur. Erlendur has certainly had some sadness in his history, and his personal relationships are far from perfect. He has his weaknesses and scars, so to speak. But he goes on. He functions. He tries to live his life the best he can. He’s got a lot of personal strength in that sense. I like Liza Marklund’s Annika Bengtzon for a similar reason. She’s had her share of sorrow and trauma both in and outside of the job, so to speak. And yes, her troubles affect her personally and professionally. But she’s not so debilitated by them that she can’t function. She tries to move on and she picks up her pieces.

 

The “Mindless Killer”

Admittedly, there aren’t that many believable reasons that one person kills another (or a series of others). The decision to take a life is often not an easy one, so in real life, there’s got to be a compelling motive, even if that motive is a “flash” of rage or jealousy. The same is true in crime fiction. Of course, there are individuals who’ve been warped by circumstances or who have severe mental illness or psychosis. For those individuals, the motive to kill may seem “mindless” to others, but they make perfect sense to the individuals themselves. Stories that include such characters (e.g. Thomas Harris’ Red Dragon) can be compelling when the characters are well-drawn. But all too often, novels feature serial killers with no real believable motive to murder. The result is all too often a bloodbath with no depth to the plot.

It’s certainly possible to create a very well-written and absorbing novel in which a killer commits multiple murders for a psychological reason. For instance, in Agatha Christie’s Three Act Tragedy (AKA Murder in Three Acts), Hercule Poirot investigates the poisoning murder of a seemingly inoffensive and beloved clergyman, Stephen Babbington. Poirot is just beginning to look into that death when there is another, similar death. Later, there’s another. What’s fascinating about these murders is that the motive is psychological. And yet, it’s not at all mindless. There’s a very believable and logical reason for which these murders are committed.

These are just a few themes that I think have gone past their “sell-by” date; you’re by no means obliged to agree with me. What do you think? Are there themes you think should be retired? If there are, what are they?

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28 Responses to A Word or Two About “Sell-By” Dates…

  1. I can’t think of any other themes that should be retired (at least not forever), but I sure hope Hannibal Lechter type characters don’t make it onto my book shelves. Those evil serial killer novels creep me out for weeks after I read them, so I try not to get caught up in them anymore.

    • Pat – I know what you mean. A really well-written creepy character is enough to haunt anyone’s dreams. I only read those characters – even the brilliant ones – in measured doses.

  2. Patti Abbott

    Serial killers is my pet peeve. I haven’t read or watched one in years that interested me. Yet they still abound. I mean how many are there in real life compared to the thousand on bookshelves.

    • Patti – Oh, I know exactly what you mean. There really are comparatively few real-life serial killers. That’s I think why they make the news when they strike and (hopefully) are caught. I get tired of the “mindless serial killer” theme myself.

  3. Chapter after of adrenaline popping writing and a protagonist that hasn’t been able to get any sleep for days lack a balance that either leaves one tired or bored. Some ‘thrillers’ are glorified roller coast rides and the market is glutted and I think are losing some of their appeal. balance.

    • H.L. – Balance is indeed the word. There do seem to be a number of “edge of your seat” thrillers that really do take the reader for a roller-coaster ride (love that description, by the way). Some “thrills and chills” can be very exciting and can add to a novel or the genre in general. But once that adrenaline rush takes the place of a good solid story and interesting characters, it really can get wearisome. Well-taken point!

  4. I’d add a sub-genre to your tortured detective. Brilliant female sleuth, with misogynist male colleagues, she’s tougher than any man. Yet she has no personal life, because she just can’t switch off from her job and no man is a match for her.

    Also, I so agree with your mindless killer. Someone once said that everyone should believe in what they’re doing, and have – in their minds – justifiable reasons for it. Even if nobody else agrees :-)

    • Sarah – Oh, you’ve a very good point about the brilliant female sleuth-who-has-to-deal-with-misogyny. That sets the female sleuth up to be way too superhuman and not likeable. It sets the male colleagues up to be “cavemen.” Neither of those stereotypes is useful or interesting. I tire of that scenario, too.
       
      And thanks for that point about the need to believe in what they’re doing. That holds true for killers, too. In some way, it has to make sense to them and be reasonable.

  5. Margot: When I grew up on the farm we had 200 hives of bees. I loved how, once the honey had granulated (turned solid) it could be stored for a long time. One of our neighbours tried to keep the liquidity longer by storing the fresh honey in his freezer. Not much to do with your post but is amazing how long honey can be kept in storage.

    • Bill – Thanks for sharing your stories about honey and bees. I didn’t know that your family kept bees! I also hadn’t thought about the idea of freezing honey to keep it from granulating. And you’re right; it is amazing how long one can keep honey. I’ve read that usable honey has even been discovered in ancient Egyptian tombs.

  6. You are spot on with all of these. For me, I’m especially bored with the “mindless killer.” . OK, there are sexually twisted serial killers, but in every town, on every street corner? We see TV shows with mindless killers perpetrating horrors every week. I think most killers are overgrown children, convinced of their own righteousness.

    • Anne – Thanks :-) . I know what you mean about those serial killers. Yes, they exist. They’re deeply disturbed and they do kill people in twisted ways. But they are rare. As you say, they’re not on every street corner and there are certainly aren’t enough of them in real life to warrant as much TV air time as they get. Interesting point, too, about killers’ mentalities. I think you’re right that some killers are indeed convinced they’re doing the right thing. There’s some logic to their thinking even if that logic doesn’t make sense to a mature adult mind.

  7. kathy d.

    I agree on this mindless killer and serial killer problem. I really like a good puzzle, a good whodunnit, not pursuit of a serial killer. It’s been done to death. Even in Scandinavian countries, where it is said that statistically, there are no serial killers or a very few, the number of them from that region in crime fiction makes it sound like 1 out of 20 people are serial killers. I think the U.S. gets the distinction of the highest rate!
    I don’t like women being seen as persecuted victims so much, although this is a reality in real life, of domestic abuse, sexual violence, etc. But I like to see strong women characters, like Lizbeth Salander, who fight back. This is harder in real life, and in the U.S., where funding for rape crisis centers and shelters for domestic abuse survivors has been cut to the bone, with these facilities closing in many states. That puts women in a tougher position, with nowhere, or few places to turn — as Lizbeth had nowhere to turn throughout her life until she met Blomqvist and his sister, Annika Gianni, others, mainly women, who helped her in Book III, including many women. (If Sweden had a victims’ services’ bureau or sex crimes unit or women’s rape crisis centers or shelters, it would have helped Lizbeth — but no Millennium trilogy would have been written.)
    And yes, the thrillers with non-stop pace: I draw the line when the action is going on nonstop, and there is no character development, no thinking by the detective either, just action. Ugh! Jo Nesbo did this exactly right in my opinion in Nemesis, fast-paced, complicated story lines, yet good character development and interesting people in the book. I won’t read thrillers without that element. I’ve seen a few, skimmed them in 20 minutes, and that was that.

    • Kathy – Interesting point! For books that feature a mindless serial killer, it”s harder to have an interesting intellectual puzzle. It’s possible, but it often doesn’t happen. I think that and the often-excessive gore are what put me off a lot of the mindless killer/serial killer motif.
       
      And I agree that in this economy, it is getting harder for women to find a place to go when they’ve been raped or otherwise abused. So in that sense, the female victim rings a bit more true. Still, the theme has been overdone, I think, and a lot of people do like characters such as Lisbeth Salander, who, as you say, fights back. She’s been through terrible things, and Larsson makes that clear. But at the same time, she hasn’t given up, she stays strong and as you say, there are people who help her. I think it’s that and her Salander’s strength as a character that keep her story absorbing.
       
      You’re quite right, too, that it’s possible to create a thriller-like pace (Nemesis is a good example) and still have decent character development and depth. I’ve read thrillers like that. But as you say, too many of them sacrifice solid characters and a thoughtful plot for speed and pace. I’m not much of a fan of that, either.

  8. Margot, you’ve given some great examples here. I think the ‘tortured detective’ has been overdone. I know there needs to be some problems for detectives, but over and over again and mostly the same thing gets to be old quick. I like the example of Carl Mørck you gave. He has problems, but he continues to work and little by little even becomes more driven by the case. Thanks for another interesting post.

    Mason
    Thoughts in Progress
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    • Mason – You put your finger on one of the important problems with novels where there’s this emphasis on the “tortured detective.” When those problems come, as you say, over and over again relentlessly, it does get old. It’s hard to stay interested in a story like that. As you say, that’s what’s refreshing about Mørck. As the story goes on, we see him slowly start to heal. The problems he faces are real but not relentless.

  9. Thank you for the kind words Margot.

    I agree with most others here about serial killers knocking off loads of people for bizarre psychological reasons – I am just not interested in these stories unless there is a really unique perspective or insight (and to me that does not mean just a more hideous way of torturing or a higher body count)

    • Bernadette – Oh, my pleasure :-) . I agree completely about the kind of serial-killer story where the emphasis is on thoroughly twisted psychology, horrible torture and a high body count. I’m simply not interested, either. Besides the fact that I don’t like gratuitous pain and violence and blood, books like that just simply aren’t interesting. One doesn’t get useful insights from them. When I read, I like to learn something, or try to untangle an intellectual puzzle, or get to know some interesting characters – ideally some sort of combination :-) . The twisted-serial killer motif just doesn’t do that for me.

  10. Brilliant post!
    The “Persecuted Female Victim/s”
    I like it when these two worlds collide. The victims and the fighters. Because sadly, there are still victims around. In crime fiction, we still see the victims killed because they are in the role of the victim and we see the fighters killed because they have taken on that new role which now doesn’t fit with someone’s sense of right or wrong.
    That being said, we didn’t see many females in the role of detective or sleuth in the past and now we see it more than ever!

    The “Tortured Detective”
    One thing I’m trying to do in my detective fiction is not give them a tortured background but a tortured present. And that way, the reader is there throughout the way, they don’t feel left out and they can fight and struggle with the character through it.

    • Clarissa – Thank you :-) ! And you make a very well-taken point about the worlds of victim and fighter colliding. I hadn’t thought about it that way, but I like the way you put that. And you’re right; more and more we see female sleuths, and not just amateur ones. As the decades go by, it seems to be mattering less and less that they’re female although I know there’s still plenty of misogyny out there. I like that development in crime fiction, actually.
       
      You’ve got an interesting way, too, to deal with that balance between the need for the detective to have some kind of challenge and the need to also not overdo it. Take the reader on that journey… intriguing.

  11. This is a wonderful post! I am definitely going to book mark it so when I get back to revising my mystery I can check through it. I think, I unfortunately have a female cop in a somewhat unfriendly peer group, as Sarah mentioned above – have to spark that up a bit. I’m tired of finding out that females were sexually abused as kids, both in mysteries and in main stream novels. Perhaps it is because I’m a therapist but come on! Not everyone was sexually abused. Find another reason why your protagonist or victim is suffering.

    • Jan – Aww… thank you :-) . I’m sure you’ve got nothing to worry about with your mystery; the more I learn about it the more eager I am to read it :-) . You make an interesting point, too, about about early sexual abuse of female characters. That’s a tough one because as you know from your work, it’s a terrible and all-too-real phenomenon. It happens. It happens to boys, too. Not to acknowledge that is to ignore a serious problem. But you’re right that there are a number of things that can happen to people besides that sort of abuse. As you say, not everyone was sexually abused. Definitely something worth thinking about…

  12. kathy d.

    Speaking of the tortured detective, how about the alcoholic detective? That has been been done to death also. I like Nesbo’s Harry Hole, but I have more books to go, and I’m not sure how many alcoholic, self-destructive binges I can read about.
    Granted, not all detectives can have the happy family and home life of Guido Brunetti or Irene Huss. However, drinking binges and black-outs get tired. How different can they be?
    On Lizbeth Salander, when I read some criticisms of her character — which I disagreed with, I always pointed out that she had nowhere to turn, even as a child. People who were supposed to help her betrayed and abused her — until Blomkvist and his colleagues, sister and others get involved. My other point is that many people who went through what she did in real life would curl up, give up and withdraw from the world completely, never venture out, never trust anyone, just shut down.
    That her character fought back was great. Society still doesn’t forgive women for doing that even here. Women probably do in the main.

    • Kathy – It’s true that the alcoholic detective has definitely been overdone. After a time, that kind of self-destruction does get to be too much. As you say, not every fictional sleuth can have a happy family life. That wouldn’t be realistic. But yes, the drinking/blackout/self-pity cycles do get old after a while…
       
      I think you’ve hit on some important facets of Lisbeth Salander’s character that make it interesting. As you say, she doesn’t give up and she doesn’t let the things that have happened to her stop her from wanting to live. As you say, she fights back. Her character has a lot of flaws, and she behaves like the deeply wounded person that she is. But she stays strong.

  13. kathy d.

    I read somewhere that when seeing the movie, women stood up and cheered when Lizbeth Salander took revenge against the guardian/rapist.
    It was very hard to watch these scenes in the movie. But few women characters in books or movies avenge the attacks on them. I’m sure women cheered or inwardly cheered at seeing this. I’ll be curious to see what happens with the U.S. audiences with the U.S. version.
    I don’t know what her alternatives would have been in real life. Some people are traumatized and live with PTSD for years, or just withdraw and give up. Or maybe get a lot of help.

    • Kathy – I’m quite sure there were a lot of women who did exactly that – literally cheered for Lisbeth. And you make a point, too; there are a lot of stories of women who are abused, both in real life and fiction. There are a lot fewer stories of women who take vengeance. It will be interesting to see what the U.S. version of that movie will be like…
       
      And you also make an interesting point about what, if any, alternatives Lisbeth really has. Giving up is an option but somehow I don’t think she would take that one.

  14. Kathy beat me to the punch with the alcoholic detective or cop. There are so many other ways to show that the hero is flawed that falling back on alcoholism just doesn’t cut it anymore.

    I’m also tired of the sociopath who was abused by his mother or father, usually mother. Now, though, I think we’ll be bombarded by ex-soldiers with PTSD or kids who have been bullied and that turns them into killers. Lots of writers will get on those bandwagons.

    • Barbara – I know what you mean about falling back on alcoholism (you put that quite well, by the way). There really are myriad fictional detectives with that particular demon and it does get overdone.
       
      And you raise an interesting question. What will be the next popular demons that sleuths face? It could be soldiers with PTSD (There are several authors who’ve woven that into their sleuths’ characters – some quite successfully). Or it could be former victims of bullies. It’s hard to say but you have some interesting ideas.

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